Thursday, December 11, 2008
Journal entry #10
Act Walking to the road to graduation
Actor: Athletes
Scene: A highway
Agency: By walking on the road
Purpose: To graduate and live a better life
Actor: Athletes
Scene: A highway
Agency: By walking on the road
Purpose: To graduate and live a better life
Journal entry #9
magazine.continental.com/.../idea-makers.html
Remove frame
1 Lebron is a dominant player
2 basketball is a business
3 You become a man playing basketball
: www.stateuniversity.com/universities/FL/Nova_...
Remove frame
there is more to nova that meets the eye.
Nova looks expensive.
A great education can be found at nova
Remove frame
1 Lebron is a dominant player
2 basketball is a business
3 You become a man playing basketball
: www.stateuniversity.com/universities/FL/Nova_...
Remove frame
there is more to nova that meets the eye.
Nova looks expensive.
A great education can be found at nova
jOURNAL ENTRY #8
I think the picture can persuade the audience if someone wanted to make a case if Lebron was a great player that picture does that.
http://www.all-nba-all-basketball.com/images/LEBRON_JAMES1.jpg
http://www.all-nba-all-basketball.com/images/LEBRON_JAMES1.jpg
Journal entry #7
In this essay, Orwell suggests that the English language is on the decline because the people who use English are misusing the language. What sort of things does he mention as proof that the English language is in trouble?
The trouble english language is in is that many bad language like slang is messing up the language and english lacks the passion of lets say french or spanish.
Orwell wrote this essay almost 60 years ago. Do you think the English language is in a better or worse condition than when Orwell wrote his essay? Can you think of modern examples of how people misuse language?
The english language I believe is worse because of all the slang we have and lack of teaching in certain areas, texting is really hurting grammar of english language.
What do you think of Orwell’s list of rules to improve your writing? I dont agree with it that much maybe because i dont write like that but it could be helpful to some people.
What do you think he means when he suggests that one should focus on “pictures and sensations” before one sits down to put words on the page? Have you ever done this? Does it help you write better?
I think he means find a picture that shows how you feel and then you can pick the perfect word to describe it, I dont think it will help me write because I free lance then I put it together.
The trouble english language is in is that many bad language like slang is messing up the language and english lacks the passion of lets say french or spanish.
Orwell wrote this essay almost 60 years ago. Do you think the English language is in a better or worse condition than when Orwell wrote his essay? Can you think of modern examples of how people misuse language?
The english language I believe is worse because of all the slang we have and lack of teaching in certain areas, texting is really hurting grammar of english language.
What do you think of Orwell’s list of rules to improve your writing? I dont agree with it that much maybe because i dont write like that but it could be helpful to some people.
What do you think he means when he suggests that one should focus on “pictures and sensations” before one sits down to put words on the page? Have you ever done this? Does it help you write better?
I think he means find a picture that shows how you feel and then you can pick the perfect word to describe it, I dont think it will help me write because I free lance then I put it together.
Journal entry #6
Particle: My belief was hard work and I dont think hard work will ever go. Hard work give people qualities that are good for life like appreciation and patience.
Wave: Hard work cant change because the will always be people that have to work hard to succeed, but the way you work hard can change due to technology.
Field: Well I think every culture was change somehow by hard work.
Me: What do you think about hard work?
Him: I think it is everything to success.
Me: Have you every had to work hard?
Him: Yes constantly, but I got use to it.
Me: Do you think you can succeed without it?
Me: LOL no.
What do you think about hard work?
It is very tough to wake up knowing you got to work hard.
How long can you work hard?
I hope all my life.
What are you doing that is hard now?
Lol school.
Wave: Hard work cant change because the will always be people that have to work hard to succeed, but the way you work hard can change due to technology.
Field: Well I think every culture was change somehow by hard work.
Me: What do you think about hard work?
Him: I think it is everything to success.
Me: Have you every had to work hard?
Him: Yes constantly, but I got use to it.
Me: Do you think you can succeed without it?
Me: LOL no.
What do you think about hard work?
It is very tough to wake up knowing you got to work hard.
How long can you work hard?
I hope all my life.
What are you doing that is hard now?
Lol school.
Journal entry #5
This essay was written in 1971. What types of duties does Syfers describe as being performed by wives? To what degree do you believe these are still done primarily by women? Have these or other things about the husband/wife relationship changed in the last 37 years?
Syfers explain duties that is done in a house regularly, like cleaning cooking going to work etc. There are women that are what he explain but usually they are higher socially and financially, and most things changed since he wrote it.
How would you describe Syfers’ writing style? Does she do things you would typically avoid in your own writing?
Syfers writng is writing that you read as a past time not really to do work or research on. She can fix errors in her writing and probably work on her grammar too.
Syfers was reacting to a social structure that she felt at the time was unfair. What types of injustice or unfairness do you see in the world nowadays that you think should be addressed? Syfers implies that men benefit from the servile position of women in the family. Who benefits from the injustices you see active in the world today?
There are alot of injusties that people benefit off of, like gun runners arm dealers that sell guns illegally to countries for they can kill people sometimes their own, and women situation in the work place greatly changed for the good but you will still find that prejudice because I dont think it will ever go away.
Syfers explain duties that is done in a house regularly, like cleaning cooking going to work etc. There are women that are what he explain but usually they are higher socially and financially, and most things changed since he wrote it.
How would you describe Syfers’ writing style? Does she do things you would typically avoid in your own writing?
Syfers writng is writing that you read as a past time not really to do work or research on. She can fix errors in her writing and probably work on her grammar too.
Syfers was reacting to a social structure that she felt at the time was unfair. What types of injustice or unfairness do you see in the world nowadays that you think should be addressed? Syfers implies that men benefit from the servile position of women in the family. Who benefits from the injustices you see active in the world today?
There are alot of injusties that people benefit off of, like gun runners arm dealers that sell guns illegally to countries for they can kill people sometimes their own, and women situation in the work place greatly changed for the good but you will still find that prejudice because I dont think it will ever go away.
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